tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-824466663015731028.post3493419108297421845..comments2024-03-01T00:32:17.498-05:00Comments on Read Write Believe: Poetry Friday: One thing leads to anotherSarahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12225998457253574928noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-824466663015731028.post-88645015498773551632007-10-08T08:27:00.000-04:002007-10-08T08:27:00.000-04:00Terrific Rosen article! I've printed it out to sha...Terrific Rosen article! I've printed it out to share bits with teachers I know.<BR/><BR/>Here's my line:<BR/><BR/>"Surrender to the river"Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-824466663015731028.post-24452350095248817862007-10-06T20:09:00.000-04:002007-10-06T20:09:00.000-04:00I have never been able to get further than:Today i...I have never been able to get further than:<BR/><BR/>Today is a shirt<BR/>That does not fit.<BR/><BR/>Maybe for good reason, I don't know!Katie Alenderhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17210222751354931694noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-824466663015731028.post-72582135340392223582007-10-05T17:43:00.000-04:002007-10-05T17:43:00.000-04:00What a great post (I so look forward to stopping b...What a great post (I so look forward to stopping by here every week) and so many links ... I'll be back .... <BR/>:-)Karen Edmisten https://www.blogger.com/profile/04446214835142625161noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-824466663015731028.post-1355189340139014662007-10-05T14:54:00.000-04:002007-10-05T14:54:00.000-04:00I just landed in Chicago and look what was waiting...I just landed in Chicago and look what was waiting for me! All these great lines of poetry just begging to be taken out for a walk and a slice of deep dish. :0<BR/><BR/> You guys are awesome. I can't wait to play with these, and to see how you play with them too...Sarahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12225998457253574928noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-824466663015731028.post-935893489692806522007-10-05T14:31:00.000-04:002007-10-05T14:31:00.000-04:00Good idea!He moves with studied elegance and pract...Good idea!<BR/><BR/>He moves with studied elegance <BR/>and practiced, conscious style<BR/><BR/>(I've had that one in my mind ever since watching my nephew glide into a room one evening with one eye on his reflection in the mirror...)Mary Witzlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06458299046574564155noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-824466663015731028.post-5578942468496568692007-10-05T14:12:00.000-04:002007-10-05T14:12:00.000-04:00This is actually a line from a prose poem that tur...This is actually a line from a prose poem that turned into a story (which, really, is <I>still</I> a prose poem) that I'm still not happy with, but here goes:<BR/><BR/><I>Three Uncles went to Vietnam,</I>tanita✿davishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01671822274852087499noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-824466663015731028.post-73766959497671571072007-10-05T13:20:00.000-04:002007-10-05T13:20:00.000-04:00"Zeno and friends went out to play,"This is in hon..."Zeno and friends went out to play,"<BR/><BR/>This is in honor of our rooster, not new or newly a rooster but newly recognized (by us) as a rooster. My son said that "Zeno and Friends" sounds like a good title for a picture book. <BR/><BR/>Lots of good links here, Sara. Thank you.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-824466663015731028.post-67602818737188920662007-10-05T11:56:00.000-04:002007-10-05T11:56:00.000-04:00Phewww. Love this little brain race you went on.He...Phewww. Love this little brain race you went on.<BR/><BR/>Here's a line for you all from a poem that's been just sitting there for years now. Have at it:<BR/><BR/>As if it were crude or flawedAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-824466663015731028.post-52691411198625719682007-10-05T11:38:00.000-04:002007-10-05T11:38:00.000-04:00Firstly, I am cursing you because my brainradio im...Firstly, I am cursing you because my brainradio immediately grabbed hold of The Fixx song, "One thing leads to another". And it won't. let. go.<BR/><BR/>Secondly, great links. I am stoked about the possibility of downloading poems to my iPod. That's wicked cool.<BR/><BR/>Thirdly, a line: <BR/>"Brown is the new black," she said.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-824466663015731028.post-56365982766539353372007-10-05T09:26:00.000-04:002007-10-05T09:26:00.000-04:00"There is a picture of usas children(without any s..."There is a picture of us<BR/>as children<BR/>(without any sorrow)"<BR/><BR/>I stumbled upon that beginning of an original poem last night, and it stood out, 'cause I don't really write poetry but had attempted that about, oh, five years ago. <BR/><BR/>I love this post with all these great links. And I love that line from your poem, Sara, which you can't find a home for. LOVE it. A lot. If you ever finish it, I'd love to see it. <BR/><BR/>Can't wait to meet Sara tomorrow, whom I feel like I've known for about ten years -- instead of less than one.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-824466663015731028.post-25528299207826097142007-10-05T09:14:00.000-04:002007-10-05T09:14:00.000-04:00ooooh, good one...ooooh, good one...Sarahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12225998457253574928noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-824466663015731028.post-81376365812743608102007-10-05T08:22:00.000-04:002007-10-05T08:22:00.000-04:00Thanks for these great links, Sara. Love the Micha...Thanks for these great links, Sara. Love the Michael Rosen article, and all the goodies at the Poetry Thursday site!<BR/>Here's my original first line: "This poem is eating you . . ."jamahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07859083373087448194noreply@blogger.com