Friday, June 28, 2024

Poetry Friday: Wabi-Sabi Poems



Ruins of a banquet hall,
Sudeley Castle, UK



June's challenge was to write a poem capturing the idea of wabi-sabi, the Japanese concept of impermanence and imperfection.  Here's a quote that Tricia shared from the book, Wabi Sabi: The Japanese Art of Impermanence by Andrew Juniper:

Wabi-sabi is an aesthetic that finds beauty in things imperfect, impermanent and incomplete. Taken from the Japanese words wabi, which translates to less is more, and sabi, which means attentive melancholy, wabi-sabi refers to an awareness of the transient nature of earthly things and a corresponding pleasure in the things that bear the mark of this impermanence.



Now, I've written about wabi-sabi before, and seemed to remember it being about celebrating "the crack in everything."  And, on our recent trip to Wales and England, I reveled in taking photos of glorious ruins of castles and abbeys.  (I do love a good ruin.)  But this time, the phrase that haunted me from that quote was "attentive melancholy." 

I'm not by nature a pessimistic person--not that I can't be negative or grumpy at times, but melancholy implies a sort of marination in sadness that I'm not capable of sustaining.  But what was I missing by not looking with that sort of attention--the kind of attention that doesn't try to change things for the better, but acknowledges what is unfinished, and imperfect, and sees the beauty in that?   

I'm so curious to see what my poetry sisters came up with in answer to that question. As for me, my only idea came from looking at my hands and thinking that I'm as spotted now as an old leaf. 





This leaf

this leaf will dry

the color seep away

the veins break


this leaf will fall

lose its light

unmoor from the tree


the road will go away

the fence, the barn, too

the house where I met him


this leaf will crackle

under muddy boots

this spotted hand let go


-----Sara Lewis Holmes (all rights reserved) 



Explore my poetry sisters' posts here:


Liz

Tanita

Laura

Tricia

Mary Lee



Poetry Friday is hosted by our own Tricia at The Miss Rumphius Effect.