The Poetry Seven's assignment this month was simple: Write a poem inspired by an image. (Technically, it's called ekphrastic poetry.) We all used the same image, plucked specially for us from the magpie-marvelous collection of Tanita Davis.
(Source: lowpresssure, via baikuken)
Sculpture by Danish artist Susanne Ussing
Growth Spurt
Hold your tongue, they said.
Unable to grasp how such a
delicate hand as my own could
hold such a large and dextrous muscle,
I laughed.
First discovery:
Laughter is mighty exercise
for the tongue.
Have a care, they said.
But I could not nibble at care—at the metallic whiff
of the bit approaching, my tongue bucked
words, flinging them upright and uncleft
into the wild.
Second discovery:
Language multiplies the reach
of the tongue.
Quit jawboning, they said.
But, by now, my head—enlarged by the excavations
of my tongue—was naught but a bony bloom;
the world, whispering back,
unquittable.
Third discovery:
I was not alone
but one of many tongues.
Hush now, they said. Hear our prayers.
Their too-small devotions brushed my skin,
worms turning dirt. I shot to the sky,
a hot-house flower, all of me muscled as
my tongue.
Together, we made the
Fourth discovery:
I knelt; they held
my heart, thrumming.
---Sara Lewis Holmes (all rights reserved)
I tried not to look at what my poetry sisters wrote for the same image until I was done with mine, but OH! Wow. Go look now:
Liz
Kelly
Tanita
Tricia (Happy 9th blog anniversary!)
Laura
Andi
Poetry Friday is hosted today by Katya at Write. Sketch. Repeat.
Friday, November 6, 2015
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See, this is what I love about your work. You took this way out of the literal ballpark, while I am tethered closely (too much really) to the image.
ReplyDeleteI am quite fond of these discoveries and how they connect to the mixed media of the sculpture. And I love your hot-house flower shooting to the sky. Funny I saw the glass, but not the greenhouse.
Amazing poem.
Sara, this is fabulous!!! I am in awe of what you've done here. Seriously.
ReplyDeleteLoud and proud, girlie. That's where it's at. Love this.
ReplyDeleteOh, Sara, I love lots of this, but most especially the horsification stanza. You always take things in such an imaginative, unexpected direction.
ReplyDeleteHello SARA -- Wow, do I love this. I'm so in love with the language here but also the attitude. Thank you.
ReplyDeleteI love how this is all pushing and reaching and discovering...until the end, when it turns quiet and bends back down.
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